Comments on: Like Bricks - Rewrite http://www.saidthefox.com/archives/56 Wed, 08 Sep 2010 21:30:01 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7.1 hourly 1 By: vyx http://www.saidthefox.com/archives/56/comment-page-1#comment-1021 vyx Fri, 12 Dec 2008 15:38:20 +0000 http://www.saidthefox.com/archives/56#comment-1021 Good re-write, indeed. Your use of language is impressive, as always (I do read, I just don't always post. But you asked so nicely). I have to admit, though, I like the original better. I like the grit. Don't get me wrong, this one is great, but the other was just as rough as its subject. It fit. Great work, Fox. Great. Good re-write, indeed. Your use of language is impressive, as always (I do read, I just don’t always post. But you asked so nicely).

I have to admit, though, I like the original better. I like the grit. Don’t get me wrong, this one is great, but the other was just as rough as its subject. It fit.

Great work, Fox. Great.

]]> By: thalassa http://www.saidthefox.com/archives/56/comment-page-1#comment-974 thalassa Tue, 18 Nov 2008 06:58:21 +0000 http://www.saidthefox.com/archives/56#comment-974 josh! this re-write is good! '- a blizzard - and he was lost in it' really stuck- i like that phrasing a lot. also, dude, you have the wrong "damn" in there about the river of blood, unless you're being clever, in which case you may feel free to call me a philistine and laugh. lol josh! this re-write is good! ‘- a blizzard - and he was lost in it’ really stuck- i like that phrasing a lot. also, dude, you have the wrong “damn” in there about the river of blood, unless you’re being clever, in which case you may feel free to call me a philistine and laugh. lol

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