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The proceeding post contains some work that is, in a word, late.
In another word, unfinished.
You’ll find the lastest version of “Like Bricks”. The majority of the first half has been completely redone, though it carries the same purpose and theme. The second half is mostly a rehash of the initial draft with a few edits in flow and diction.
As always, all comments are much appreciated.
Let me know how this newest draft (namely the first half) compares to the last.